Axie Force

Hey ppl a lot of officers that filling our tabs with content are not native english speakers or simple old retards.

But to have all tabs without typos and in good understandable english it is very important, cause it is a part of our clan's image and it is simple better if all in the clan understand all that stays on tabs.

So we decided to announce the Typos and "bad english" hunt

Please put all typos and suggestions for changing text on ALL tabs here in this thread to spare the time of other ppl (in order not too search for every typo twice). I will count the typos and suggestions and the 3 best helpers will get after Christmas events these prizes (sponsored by me and our super duper awesome mega clever old leader Zappp)


First place: 30k
Second place: 20k
Third place: 10k


The prizes will be given as usual threw Tamer Market (you simple should sell some shit on it that costs at least 5k to us, usual it is amnesiac rice )

Current situation:

• Juanaton 70
• Vidra 47
• TanHongFan 16
• Ziiba 12
• CondorDog 2
• Running 2
• Tuneboy 1
• Luxr 1

http://imgup.motion-twin.com/dinorpg/9/0/0e6376ed_595890.jpg

Scorpscuba Caller ... visit Joveboze and speAk with him



fixed by Loki, this post update by Juanaton

Running wrote:http://imgup.motion-twin.com/dinorpg/9/0/0e6376ed_595890.jpg

Scorpscuba Caller ... visit Joveboze and speAk with him

Thank you

In the description of the white mushroom - should read "otherS like it in soup"

fixed. by Loki

In description of Overload on double skills page - should be chances not cnances

fixed. by Loki

In the description of Brazier on the sphere skills page it looks like there is an extra space between Fire and at...not sure that's actually a typo since it could just be an appearance thing.

fixed. by Loki

On the maps page I have some suggestions for rewording the text - some of them sound awkward to me...and I found a few typos too but implementing my suggestions would make it so that the typos would have to be searched for again anyway...I'll list them, but we may have to check the page again.

On the Dinotown Kingdom Map:

The road to Twilight Cemetery will become visible if 1) your dinoz has 10 or less OR 2) has a Skully Souvenir. You receive the Skully Souvenir for completing her third mission. Skully can be found in the Twilight Cemetery and has the same visibility conditions as the road to the cemetery.

To reveal the road to Dinoplaza in the Dinotown West region, you must have both the Bouy and Climbing gear from Professor Eugene. Then speak to Michael the Guide in Dinotown and tell him you have been to both the Atlanteid Islands and Big All-Hot.

fixed. by Loki

On the Dinotown West Map:
Change the first word to These, otherwise fine.

fixed. by Loki

On Atlanteid Islands Map:
In Scorpscuba caller it should be Dinotown Kingdom, not Dinototwn; speak with Joveboze (which I think was already mentioned); and instead of "what will lead to..." it should be "which will lead to..." or end the previous sentence and put "This will lead to..."

I don't have anyone there to check right now, but I think the monks name at Mutant Falls is Hydargol. Also, extra spaces appear around Archsage.

And for the Kabuki Aura, the punks name is Yakuzi, and I think the second sentence should be reworded to "You can read how to obtain the Kabuki Aura in the description of the Kabuki Quest."

(to be continued)

fixed Loki

Big All Hot map:

The period after Grumhel Forest should be removed.
"Freezing a dinoz makes one..."
"...unfrozen at any time, if you have space for another Dinoz."
I think the guy who freezes things is called Popotheller - I know he doesn't have an r after the first p...

Grumhel Forest map:
I'm pretty sure it's Dian Korgsey, not Diana, although Diana would make more sense to me...
"...as a reward for doing the first..."
"Mr. Bao Bob's House location in Atlanteid Islands region."
"let your Dinoz focus." (Instead of "to focus").
"are focusing" instead of "will be focusing"
"the portal will open for these dinoz."
There needs to be a space after the end of the sentence about passing through the portal.
I think the next section needs reworded to:
Once 7 dinoz have focused and the portal has opened for them, they cannot avoid going through the portal. Once through the portal, you can only leave the Dark World by killing the Guardian and receiving the Key, or dieing and reviving without the Angel Potion. Once a Dinoz has received the Key, that Dinoz may not focus again."

Dark World map:
"When you enter..."
"...already focused a few..."
"...your group through the portal..."
"...as you enter the portal."

fixed. uploaded. loki

Magnetic Steppes map:
"...King's Citadel in this region."

fixed, uploaded. Loki

Big All-Hot : Frozen Dinoz can be unfrozen at...
I think it will be better if you change unfrozen with defrosted
fixed. uploaded. Loki